I saw a woman wand’ring in the desert
Just outside the city line
I called out to her from a distance
To where she walked with a torch as dusk fell
When I got close I saw her skin was blistered
I asked if she needed help
She said she was happy to be there
As she left bloody footprints in the sand
She said the city had been too cruel to her
Time there made her run away
She felt better out in the wild
But her cracked lips were bleeding when she spoke
It seems to me you may be hurting out here
I said as twilight deepened
I am just fine she said with a scowl
And I’m never going back to that place
Then she turned and walked farther from the city
And past her I saw others
Spread out, sad torches in the desert
I called to them but they wouldn’t listen
Karl, your songs are deeply poetic. They're often based on historical saints. But I don't know whom these lyrics are about. I am guessing that this is an allegory about someone who leaves the density, corruption and caustic elements of a big city to seek God in the wilderness.
Thanks for your comment. I was aiming for the metaphor of the Church as the "city set on a hill" (Matthew 5:14) with the desert as a place of spiritual barrenness (Jeremiah 17:6).
I sure got that wrong! I like your intended metaphor.
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Deeply poetic
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Wrong interpretation
Be sure to check your email. I sent to you an AI vocal rendering done by André van Haren with Dorico and Cantai. Cantai may be something of interest to you, short of using a real voice for your compositions. From their website at https://cantai.app
"High-fidelity singing synthesis for MuseScore Studio, Dorico, and Sibelius. Cantai sings your notated lyrics with realistic phrasing, dynamics and diction."
Richard Schletty | Schletty Design and Music | www.schletty.com